The chart below shows the number of households in the US by theis annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by theis annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph compares the number of
family
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families
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in five different
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levels
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in 2007, 2011, and 2015. In general, the number of
family
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families
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in all
income
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levels
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had increased gradually over the period, despite one
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levels
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that
remined
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remained
unchanged. In detail,
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families
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with
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income
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an income
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$
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100,000 or more, which
the
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majority of the population, had experienced a marked
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from around 29
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in 2007 to over 32
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in 2015, except for
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small dip in 2011.
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number
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the number
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of
family
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families
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with
income
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less than $25,000
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rosed
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rose
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gradually from 25
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to around 27
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in the same period.
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family
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with
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income
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an income
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level
$
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25,000-$49,999 had increased steadily from around 26
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in 2007 to around 28
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in 2015.
Similarly
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,
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families
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family
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families
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with
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an income
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income
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an income
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level
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of $
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$
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75,000-$99,999, which the smallest population,
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had
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rose
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steadily from almost 15
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to 15
million
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in the same year.
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,
while
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the other four
income
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levels
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had increased,
family
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families
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with
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income
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incomes
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$
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50,000-$74,999
remined
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remained
constant
around
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at around
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21
million
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in the same period.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words income, levels, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • households
  • annual income
  • distribution
  • income brackets
  • trend
  • percentage
  • proportion
  • increase/decrease
  • financial crisis
  • middle-class
  • high-income
  • low-income
  • economic factors
  • median income
  • inflation-adjusted
  • fiscal policy
  • recession
  • wealth disparity
  • purchasing power
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