The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graphs illustrate the rate of
change
in cost from three different metals such
as copper
, nickel
, and zinc
during 12 months in 2014. Overall
, all of the categories showed a fluctuation on
each Change preposition
in
month
, especially for Nickel
. Moreover
, Nickel
once became the highest figure in early 2014, but turned the lowest in the rate of prices
Fix the agreement mistake
price
change
among other types of metals.
In the first month
of the year
, Nickel
prices
went up and became the highest rate among other types of metals accounted
for 6%, before facing a downward trend, Wrong verb form
accounting
drop
to 1% in March and continuously Wrong verb form
dropping
to
rapidly falling to the lowest at -3% in June. As opposed to Change preposition
apply
Copper
and Zinc
, where the changes were less dramatic. Copper
started at 2
% Correct article usage
a 2
change
in cost in January and began to slightly decrease to almost -1% in June. Zinc
, on the other hand
rose Change preposition
by
for
1% compared to the previous Change preposition
by
month
and its cost began to surge by 3% in the next month
before gradually Wrong verb form
falling
fall
to -1% in the first half of Wrong verb form
falling
year
2014.
In the second half of the Change the article
the year
year
, nickel
prices
continue
to decline until Wrong verb form
continued
it
showed Correct pronoun usage
they
a
progress Remove the article
apply
at the end
of the year
for
1%. The same goes for Change preposition
of
zinc
, where its prices
was Fix the agreement mistake
price
surge
to 2% in December. Whilst Wrong verb form
surged
copper
prices
almost remain
stable after June with only Wrong verb form
remained
0,5
% Correct article usage
a 0,5
change
to Correct your spelling
chance
finally
reached
almost 2% Wrong verb form
reaching
at the end
of period
given.Correct article usage
the period
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words change, copper, nickel, zinc, month, prices, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "surge" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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