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Writing Samples
Band 4

You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

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Dear Steven, I am Jon. I am writing
this
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 letter to grab your attention toward the condition of some of the
furniture
Use synonyms
 are not satisfied
last
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 week I have rented accommodation from you in your flat no. 263. I am staying with my family here. below I am explaining the problems I have
in
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with
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this
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 flat
furniture
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. The cupboard and the kitchen compartment doors are not able to close completely
moreover
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 they have become thick, the bedroom bed making noise all over the night. other types of
furniture
Use synonyms
 like
Correct article usage
the dinning
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dinning
Correct your spelling
dining
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 table
as well as
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 the study table is in broken condition. you need to fully replace it with a new one.
However
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 please consider my problems as soon as possible and come up with some solution. I have some suggestions for you to send someone to repair
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this
Correct pronoun usage
apply
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all
Correct determiner usage
these thigs
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thigs
Correct your spelling
things
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 at a time or bring
for
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apply
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us new
furniture
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, If so I will be so great
full
Correct word choice
apply
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to you.
or
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Or
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 please arrange an alternative flat to stay
which
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in which
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 will be in good condition. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully Jon.

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task response
Ensure to address the prompt fully and clearly. Specify your requests clearly and provide complete information pertaining to the furniture issues.
coherence cohesion
Ensure the use of appropriate structural elements such as introduction, body, conclusion. Improve the coherence by organizing ideas into paragraphs with clear topic sentences, and ensure appropriate use of cohesive devices to link ideas.
lexical resource
Expand your vocabulary and use more precise and varied expressions to convey your message effectively. Ensure the appropriate use of formal language in the context of a letter to a landlord.
grammatical range
Review sentence structure and pay attention to subject-verb agreement, tenses, and word order. Also, check for punctuation and article use to enhance the accuracy of your writing.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dear
  • I am writing to express my dissatisfaction
  • regarding
  • the condition
  • furniture
  • belongings
  • for instance
  • damaged
  • broken
  • worn-out
  • appliance
  • household items
  • it is unacceptable
  • inconvenient
  • inhabitable
  • affecting
  • negatively
  • urgent attention
  • replacement
  • repair
  • resolve
  • maintenance
  • prompt response
  • Thank you for your attention
  • Yours sincerely
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