You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Steven,
I am Jon. I am writing
this
letter to grab your attention toward the condition of some of the furniture
are not satisfied last
week I have rented accommodation from you in your flat no. 263. I am staying with my family here. below I am explaining the problems I have in
Change preposition
with
this
flat furniture
.
The cupboard and the kitchen compartment doors are not able to close completely moreover
they have become thick, the bedroom bed making noise all over the night. other types of furniture
like Correct article usage
the dinning
dinning
table Correct your spelling
dining
as well as
the study table is in broken condition. you need to fully replace it with a new one.
However
please consider my problems as soon as possible and come up with some solution. I have some suggestions for you to send someone to repair this
all Correct pronoun usage
apply
Correct determiner usage
these thigs
thigs
at a time or bring Correct your spelling
things
for
us new Change preposition
apply
furniture
, If so I will be so great full
to you. Correct word choice
apply
or
please arrange an alternative flat to stay Capitalize word
Or
which
will be in good condition.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully
Jon.Change preposition
in which
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task response
Ensure to address the prompt fully and clearly. Specify your requests clearly and provide complete information pertaining to the furniture issues.
coherence cohesion
Ensure the use of appropriate structural elements such as introduction, body, conclusion. Improve the coherence by organizing ideas into paragraphs with clear topic sentences, and ensure appropriate use of cohesive devices to link ideas.
lexical resource
Expand your vocabulary and use more precise and varied expressions to convey your message effectively. Ensure the appropriate use of formal language in the context of a letter to a landlord.
grammatical range
Review sentence structure and pay attention to subject-verb agreement, tenses, and word order. Also, check for punctuation and article use to enhance the accuracy of your writing.
