In some countries, private cars are now banned from certain city centres. What are the advantages of such a system and do you feel that this is something that most cities should adopt?
Nowadays, climate change is one of the biggest issues every country is facing.
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task response
Your essay tackles both the advantages of banning private cars in city centres and your opinion on the matter. However, the introduction can be more precise and directly address the benefits of such a system and whether you think it should be adopted universally.
coherence cohesion
There are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect the clarity of your ideas. Work on sentence structure and coherence in each paragraph to make your arguments more compelling.
task response
You present a clear stance and provide relevant examples, which is commendable.
coherence cohesion
The essay has an introduction and a conclusion, which helps frame your arguments effectively.