Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you have gone to live in the new city describe the place where you are living invite your friend to come and see you Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

dear steven, I am Jon, writing
this
letter to inform you that I have shifted
in
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to
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new
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a new
the new
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country,
in
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Dubai UAE in the
last
month. I got
new
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a new
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job opportunity as a medical coder in a reputed hospital. I am living in a partition
moreover
rent is 750 AED, as I am staying alone here. I am thinking of calling you
in
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Dubai to stay with me.
However
, you are
also
a medical coder. I will try to find a job in my company only. As
this
country is very safe to live with a classic lifestyle you will adjust more quickly.
additionally
, all facilities are provided by
landlord
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. if you agree please call me.
then
we could be able to arrange all the required documents and flight tickets
for
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. and do not worry I will take care of everything. please come as soon as possible to meet me. I don't want to live alone. missing you. I am looking forward to
see
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you soon yours faithfully,
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task response
Ensure the letter addresses all elements of the prompt, including reasons for moving, description of the new place, and invitation to the friend.
coherence cohesion
Try to use appropriate linking words and cohesive devices to improve the overall flow and coherence of the letter.
lexical resource
Expand your use of vocabulary to express the ideas more precisely and effectively.
grammatical range
Exercise more control over sentence structure and use a wider range of grammatical structures to enhance the quality of writing.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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