The line graph shows the average number of weekly patients visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016
The line graph displays the mean figure of
patients
that stop
by, Four different clinics of a hospital, weekly, between 2010 and 2016.
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stopped
Overall
, it is readily apparent that individuals visiting the Diabetic and Eye departments showed a steady but significant increase over the period of time. Patients
going to see the dental clinic rose only slightly, However
, The proportion of patients
visiting the birth control centers
fluctuated throughout the years and never increased.
In 2010, Civilians coming to the Eye and diabetic clinics were nearly 130 and 70 respectively. The number of Change the spelling
centres
patients
going to the Diabetic departments started rising from 2010 to 2012 and remained steady till 2014 (around 99), Then
suddenly shot up to 180 clients in 2016. In comparison, patients
visiting the Eyesight section in 2010 increased slightly in 2012 to 150 but then
surged dramatically to 350 patients
weekly, in 2016.
On the other hand
, The Dental department only had 100 patients
weekly in 2010 but halved by 2012 (50), Although
it increased to 130 visitors in 2014, it remained steady till 2016. On the contrary
, the total amount of visitors at the birth control centre was the highest amongst the 4 in 2010 (around 250) and then
increased to 250 in 2012 but then
declined in 2014 nearly to 180 individuals and Correct your spelling
raised
rose
rise
rised
again in 2016 to 250 againCorrect your spelling
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