In some countries, private cars are now banned from certain city centers. What are the advantages of such a system and do you feel that this is something that most cities should adopt?

One

of the widely discussed issues nowadays is environmental pollution and climate change. It affects

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various areas of our

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Cars

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since they’re

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of the most convenient types of vehicles and

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difficult to imagine our life without them.

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, there is another problematic side of using them,

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. That’s why some countries already started to find solutions.

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of them is banning them from city centres.

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of the main positives of doing so is that

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this

helps to decrease the level of traffic.

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how difficult it is

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most people living in big cities, to get to their destinations on time,

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can be quite tiresome. Another advantage is that

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it will increase the security level in cities, because there won’t be car accidents, caused by people’s rush.

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, people will spend less money

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using public transport. Turning to the other side of the argument, banning private

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can cause difficulties for disabled people

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because there is

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probability that public transport could be crowded, so there won’t be enough space and conditions for them. Another major disadvantage is money loss for many

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companies, which will affect

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their income and

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their employees to

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their

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. Having weighed everything mentioned up, we can come to

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conclusion that, we should decide what will be more important for ourselves, the convenience of

cars

or saving our world. I personally think that banning private

cars

is the right thing to do

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because the pollution the cats make impacts negatively

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our health and nature. We are responsible for everything we do. In that

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it will

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for us to use bicycles or buy electric

cars

, since they cause less damage

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environment

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Also

, we need to invest in studies and science to find more ways to make our lives better.