The bar chart below shows the number of new motorcycles sold by Harley Davidson and BMW between 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
the chart depicts
the
information about the number of new bikes sold by Correct article usage
apply
harley
and Change the capitalization
Harley
BMW
enterprises over the ten-years
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ten-year
of
period from 2010 to 2020 after analyzing the chart, it is clearly seen that for the harley Change preposition
apply
davidson
the ratio of motorcycles Add a comma
davidson,
show
a downward Correct subject-verb agreement
shows
trend
from the year
of 2010 to 2020 while
that of BMW
show
inclined trend
at the end
of decade. from the start of the year
davidson
company showed a massive Change the capitalization
Davidson
traffic
of buying their motorcycles beating BMW
massively in number attracting almost 180,000 visitors then
from the year
of 2012 to 2016 it show
a declined trend
which grows gradually getting almost 140,000 buyers after that between 2016 to 2020 it went on declining tremendously and hitting its lowest point of almost 100,000 traffic
furthermore
, at 2010 the BMW
enterprise show
inclined trend
approximately equal to 80,000 traffic
generated moreover
, it went on incresing
crossing 100,000 buyers in Correct your spelling
increasing
ther
Correct your spelling
the
their
year
of 2016 the upward trend
did not stop there and went on increasing and reaching its highest point similor vear(2016) to davidson
having almost 120,000 people Change the capitalization
Davidson
traffic
and continues further
overall
, it is clearly seen that both the companies hadmanufactures
motorcycles which were brought by many visitors Correct your spelling
had manufactures
however
davidson
business got most of the profit from their buyers Change the capitalization
Davidson
while
that of BMW
have less in the ratio of profitibility
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profitability
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