The diagram below gives information about how mercury gets into the food chain. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The depicted diagram reveals the process of how
mercury
coming from the natural and industrial environment contaminates the food chain. Overall
, it can clearly be seen that mercury
is transported into the water
where it gets incorporated by krill, fish and oyster
.
Fix the agreement mistake
oysters
Firstly
, the presented metal evolves from volcanos and coal plants into the air, reaching the ocean and then
turning into methylmercury. At the same time, there is another emission of mercury
from mines into the water
.
Subsequently
, the second phase illustrates how krill gets polluted throughout that water
, and afterwards is eaten by diverse fish like salmon, pollock, and also
oyster. Which by consequence, serves as alimentation for trout, tuna, and at last
, shark, pike, albacore and halibut. Eventually, many of those fish and oyster
will enter our food chain as Fix the agreement mistake
oysters
being
part of Unnecessary verb
apply
the
human sustenance.
Correct article usage
apply
To sum up
, the chart exhibits a circle of pollution by mercury
throughout the water
and their
inhabitants affecting the food chain.Correct pronoun usage
its
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