The chart below shows the total number of international migrants in five countries between 2000 and 2020. The table shows the percentage of migrants in each country’s population in 2020.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words

The chart below shows the total number of international migrants in five countries between 2000 and 2020. The table shows the percentage of migrants in each country’s population in 2020.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words
The bar graph indicates how much the amount of international
migrants
in Germany, India, Russia, the UK and the USA has changed from 2000 to 2020,
while
the percentage of
migrants
in the population in 2020 is shown in the table.
Overall
, the foreign community expanded in the USA, the UK, and Germany, where the proportion of
migrants
was
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higher. The two countries with the lowest share of foreign-born citizens were Russia and India, whose figures remained the same and decreased, respectively.
It is clear that
three countries have experienced a growth in their foreign community. The largest of these has always been in the USA, where the number increased by about 5 million people.
However
, the country with the largest (14.7%) of
migrants
in its national population in 2020 was Germany, immediately followed by the UK, whose society consisted of 14% foreigners, around 5 million more
migrants
than 20 years later
In contrast
, the amount of
migrants
in Russia has endured after 20 years ,
whereas
the number in India has fallen slightly and will make up the smallest share
in
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the national population in 2020 (0.4%)
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Vocabulary: Replace the words migrants with synonyms.
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