the diagram shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comaprisons where relevant.

The map illustrates the central library before and after changes were made to its layout now,

compare

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to 20 years ago. It can be seen that, clearly, the library has been updated to include dedicated spaces for

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an event

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event

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events

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, self-service facilities and a cafe and now has an open space in the

center

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centre

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. In detail, 20 years ago, to the left side of the

entrance

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entrance,

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there was a reading

room

which

provide

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newspapers and magazines, and to the

right

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right,

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there was an enquiry desk. Now, there’s a computer

room

on the left and a café where the information desk once was.

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fiction section has moved to the right-hand side of the

room

and all reference books are now on the left. There is a smaller information desk with self-service machines in what once was the adult non-fiction section. There was a

room

in the back left-hand corner that had computer games, CDs and videos, now it has been enlarged for storytelling events and

room

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a room

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for children’s fiction

book

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books

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with additional two sofas in it. There is a lecture

room

in the back right-hand corner where children’s books used to be.