Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientist think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In scientific circles, some believe that we should make efforts to make contact with extraterrestrial life.

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others maintain that doing so would be at our greatest peril. The basis for that

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seems to be underlined by one of our greatest primordial fears,

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of the unknown.

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compounded by the way aliens are depicted in the media.

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they are mostly confided in the realm of science fiction, the

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is still legitimate.

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, it should be reconsidered

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our natural tendency to over-accentuate potential risks.

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ourselves as an advanced civilization of calm temperance, capable of reason and holding a banner of peace and harmony, to creatures of an unknown origin, is another complication that must be considered.

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essay argues for making connections with aliens. If there was truly an advanced intelligent life powerful and cruel enough to exterminate and exploit us, they would probably have done so by now. If we imagine that

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malign life forms exist, it is likely that they have a technology sophisticated enough to detect us and act in our destruction.

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, sending messages in a way to

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peaceful and understanding communication between

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both sides, would be a wise decision. Even assuming that they are not as dangerous,

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have two possibilities: either they already know who we are and refrain from making

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with us for some reason, or, similar to us, they are not advanced enough to send messages across galaxies.

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, they may be in doubt about revealing themselves to us as our intentions and motives are unbeknownst to them. So, it would make sense to communicate with

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humanity in a positive light even if they are as evil as we make them out to be.

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, the

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of confronting the unknown is an inseparable part of

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condition, but we can't overlook the possibility that much of it could be unfounded, based on an over-exaggerated rationale. Man possesses a remarkable imagination that has enabled us to think beyond the present and think ahead.

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is exemplified by the proclivity of creators and artists to tell stories of fictional universes with baffling amounts of detail, fully developed humane characters, and never-ending

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph contains a topic sentence, supporting sentences, and a concluding sentence to enhance the organization of ideas and coherence.

task response

Expand on the ideas by providing more specific examples and details to support your arguments. Also, address both views thoroughly and provide a balanced discussion.

lexical resource

Incorporate a wider range of vocabulary to express your ideas more precisely. Use academic language and varied sentence structures to demonstrate your lexical resource.

grammatical range

Use a wider range of grammatical structures including complex structures such as conditional sentences, passive voice, and relative clauses. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and use of articles for a more diverse and accurate expression of ideas.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

380 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Extraterrestrial
Intelligent life forms
Interstellar communication
Alien civilizations
Hostile intentions
Technological advancements
Ethical considerations
Natural order
Vast distances
Miscommunication

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Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientist think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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