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The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first graph illustrates about
number
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 of visits abroad by
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united kingdom
residents
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 and visits to the
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Uk
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UK
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 by overseas
residents
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 from the year
of
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19979 to 1999, and the second graph shows
most
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the most
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 visited
counties
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countries
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 in 1999 by
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Uk
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UK
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residents
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at
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(TURKEY, GREECE, USA, SPAIN, FRANCE) respectively.
overall
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,the highest
number
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 resident of
Uk
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 visited to FRANCE . in 1979,
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uk
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UK
residents
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starts
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started
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 from around 12
million
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after
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and after
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 that, the
number
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increses
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increased
gradual
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 to a fifth
at
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 1985
whereas
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, overseas
residents
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visited
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who visited
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at
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the
Uk
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 started from
10million
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10 million
at
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in
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 1979,
their
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is
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a
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slight;y increases to 12
million
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at
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in
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 1985.
at
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 1999, the
number
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 of
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uk
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UK
residents
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visited
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who visited
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 abroad reached
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its
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 peak significantly to around 54
million
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on
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 the other hand,
their
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 is a gradual growth in the
number
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 of overseas
visitors
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 to around 27
million
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. in 1999, the highest
number
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UK
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of UK
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residents
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 visited
to
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the
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France and SPAIN which is around 12, 9
million
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 respectively. only 4
million
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 people visited to the
Usa
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US
at
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 1999. the lowest
number
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 of
visitors
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were
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 in
the
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turkey and
greece
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Greece
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 which
is
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 2, and 3
million
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 respectively. the
number
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 of
visitors
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at
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to
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the
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greece
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Greece
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 is three
time
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 less than the
number
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 of
visitors
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at
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to
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spain
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Spain
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, residents, uk, million, visitors with synonyms.
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