The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the provided diagram delineates the fluctuations in the cost of three distinct metals on a monthly basis throughout the year
of
2014.
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Overall
, Linking Words
although
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Nickel
was Use synonyms
initially
the most expensive type of metal, it was overtaken by both Copper and Zinc towards the end of the survey. Linking Words
In contrast
, in January, the figure for Zinc had the lowest Linking Words
price
, Use synonyms
while
outstripped Linking Words
in
prices Change preposition
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in
the end of the year.
In the first month of 2014, the figure of Change the preposition
at
Nickel
stood at 6% change and decreased dramatically to reach about 1% in March. After an unchanged trend in April, the Use synonyms
price
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has
experienced a dramatic reduction in Unnecessary verb
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sixth
month, which was followed by a trebling in Change the article
the sixth
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price
of Add an article
the price
Nickel
in July. After which, the rate of Use synonyms
this
metal remained at -1% until September. After a slight change in October, Linking Words
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Nickel
value rose significantly and Change noun form
Nickel's
finally
hit a high of 1% Linking Words
in
the end of the year.
The figure for Copper was Change the preposition
at
initially
twice as high as that for Zinc (merely 2% and 1%, respectively). The former experienced a considerable fall as it reached a little less than Linking Words
zero%
in Jun, Correct your spelling
zero
whereas
the latter Linking Words
rise
markedly three times more than the initial Replace the word
rose
price
and reached 3% in February and after that had a remarkable drop until Jun. Use synonyms
the
share of both metals rose gradually in the Capitalize word
The
last
five months, peaking at approximately 2% in December.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words nickel, price with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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