It is commonly believed that nowadays main factors that affect a child's development are media, pop culture and friends. A different point of view is that family plays the most significant role. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, it's widely accepted that there are two existing factors that can affect

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of them, the role that family plays and the environment/entourage

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the New York psychology institute, family ties and relationship between siblings and parents does have a big

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on their behaviour.

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their research, immediate family relationship with their child makes up around 78

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on a kid’s nature from the age of 2 to 12. As an example, it can seem logical that a little boy at the age of 6 can behave as same as his father; talk in the same manner, adopt some habits or try to act as same as him. That happens all because that little boy sees him as a role model. The toddlers are very vulnerable to everything that happens around them, as they absorb the

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very quickly.

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experience psychological traumas which can lead to phobias in the future.

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development could

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be affected by media, pop culture and friends.

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, a teenager may start to behave rebelliously as they don’t find their parents or elder siblings interesting anymore and try to communicate with their fellows, gain some

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from TV, radio, internet or even gossip.

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is sometimes taken without filters or censors, so it can be

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effective and destructive to the child.

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Forbes research, at

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age, they don’t fully understand the consequences of the wrong

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they are taking since they don’t have enough experience to navigate life. I believe that

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of the views mentioned above have a place to exist for the possibilities of happening, as

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nature does need to go through all the difficulties to be strengthened.

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, it is definitely clear that

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of the above-mentioned factors affect

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behavior but they

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them in different ways.