It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Whether
genuises
are born or made has become one of the most debated topics in recent decades. Some people argue that talent is a natural gift ,Correct your spelling
geniuses
while
others believe that anyone can become an excellent achiever through hard work and dedication.In this
essay
I will discuss both views and my opinion as well.
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essay,
Firstly
, as
I noticed that many artists are performing their skills from Correct word choice
apply
young
age, Add an article
a young
such
as playing musical instruments and in sports, not spending much time. Some are believing
that they are like god-gifted children.Wrong verb form
believe
In
particular
families, even if none of them Add a comma
particular,
related
to those arts,their children are showcased Add a missing verb
are related
genuies
.Correct your spelling
genuine
For example
, a recent chess grandmaster,Pragyan,from his grandparents never touched a chess board,however
,he excels in chess games.This
might be the best example of bitrh
talent.
Correct your spelling
birth
both
Secondly
,to reach the goal,thy
have to spend time practising with professionals.Under their Correct your spelling
they
guidance
they will become good artists.Add a comma
guidance,
Additionally
,those who want to be proficient in their interests,have to sucrifice
other things and concentrate on aims. Correct your spelling
sacrifice
For instance
,famous cricketer Sachin Tendulkar's son Arjun Tendulkar has not yet proven himself in cricket games.Although
, he got many opportunities,and got training from the finest coaches.
To conclude
, a few individuals are claims
that some artists got Wrong verb form
claim
capbility
by borb rather than effort. I personally believed that every successful person,spent a lot of time on it to make him famous.Correct your spelling
capability
Moreover
,without others
support it cannot be done.Change noun form
others'
other's
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lexical resource
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grammatical range
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Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
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