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The chart below provides information on the methods of waste disposal in four European countries.

The chart below provides information on the methods of waste disposal in four European countries.
The bar graph displays the data about the four
waste
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 removal techniques in the
Netherlands
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, Italy, Spain, and the United Kingdom.
Overall
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, recycling and landfilling are the most significant methods to remove
waste
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 disposal in four different countries. The
Netherlands
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 is more sustainable in terms of recycling by far;
therefore
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, the United Kingdom had the highest proportion of landfilling as the
waste
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 removal technique by far. In the
Netherlands
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, just under
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70% of the
waste
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reused
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is reused
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, making the
Netherlands
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as
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the most significant user of the reusing method in order to remove
waste
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 disposal. Other methods that are used in the UK are about between around 5% to roughly 15%.
Conversely
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, the majority of
waste
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 is landfilled in the United Kingdom, with almost 70% of the total and just below a fifth of the
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is
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used as chemical substances. In Italy, 40% of the
waste
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 is removed by
landfilling
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the landfilling
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 technique;
however
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,
the
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other methods
such
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 as recycling, burning, and using as
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chemical compounds are used by a fifth, just above a fifth, and almost
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20% of the total
waste
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.
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 to
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, in Spain,
while
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 approximately 40% of the
waste
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 is landfilled, the latter significant value is that nearly 30% of the
waste
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 is burnt.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, netherlands with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste disposal
  • Recycling
  • Landfills
  • Incineration
  • Sustainability
  • Environmental implications
  • Waste management
  • Government policies
  • Public awareness
  • Innovative methods
  • Evolution of waste disposal methods
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