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The chart below gives information about Southand's main exports in 2000, 2020, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about Southand's main exports in 2000, 2020, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the findings of Scotland's main exports
such
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 as international tourism, dairy
products
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 and meat
products
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 for three years,
that is
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, 2000, 2020 and 2025 predicted for the
future
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.
Overall
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, international tourism gained popularity in 2020 and is predicted to be more popular in
future
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 , unlike dairy
products
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 which will lose their popularity in
future
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.
However
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, meat
products
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 have fallen and are predicted to follow the same trend in
future
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. International tourism in 2000 was the most popular export in Scotland, creating just over 8
billion
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pounds
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 was increased to approximately 9
billion
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pounds
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 till now and the country is expected to reach up to 10
billion
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pounds
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 in 2025.
Although
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, dairy
products
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 have been showing the same trend till now started to create around 7
billion
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pounds
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 in 2000, and reached approximately 10
billion
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 now, which is the most famous export in the country right now but the nation expects that in 2025 it will fall down to approximately 9.5
billion
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pounds
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.
On the other hand
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, meat
products
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 show the exact opposite trend,
initially
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, it was 6
billion
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pounds
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 in 2000, reached around 5.5
billion
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pounds
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 and is expected to be approximately 5
billion
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pounds
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 in 2025.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words products, future, billion, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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