Some people think that children should be educated at school about paying taxes and personal budgeting in order to help them better manage their finances when they are older. Others think that parents should teach these things, and that children will understand taxes and how to spend money carefully through life experience in the future. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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need to understand the basic concepts of taxes and personal budgets to manage better their income in the future give value to our society become entrepreneurial and innovative in matters of business and add a positive impact on

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nowadays there are young people being

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technology and entertainment.

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know and understand

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personal finances and how the money world work and get income with intelligence and with less effort,

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need to support to the

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and teach they are the resilience when the business is not working or loss money, learn about the mistake and being a strategic person in order to overcome the particular situation To summarise, I agree with both statements because one

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school and get more relevant information than your house or from the

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sense when the

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