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The graph below provides information on the number of students from the US, UK and Australia who studied in other countries between 2002 and 2007.

The graph below provides information on the number of students from the US, UK and Australia who studied in other countries between 2002 and 2007.
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The given line graph illustrates the
number
 of overseas
students
 from three countries (the US, the UK,
Australia
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and Australia
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) over a period of 5 years (2002-2007).
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that the highest quantity of foreign
students
 was from the US compared to 2 other countries over the period. The figures for the UK showed A decrease,
while
 the
number
 of
students
 from Australia remained stable. Looking at the details, the highest
number
 of
students
 who studied abroad was from the USA with 50000
students
, followed by the UK
being at
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with
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 30000
students
 in 2002.
Although
 the former showed a decrease to around 47000
students
 in 2004 before growing to the starting point, the latter remained stable at 30000
students
 in 2003 before dropping to around 20000
students
 in 2007.
On the other hand
, the lowest
number
 of
students
 was from Australia, starting at 10000
students
 in 2002. The figure declined to around 9000
students
 in 2004 and rose to 10000
students
 before levelling out in 2005.
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