The diagram below shows how salt is removed from the sea water to make it drinkable. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how salt is removed from the sea water to make it drinkable. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the stages of making seawater suitable for drinking by reducing the salt. In general, desalination is a cycled process which consists of a number of filtering stages starting from pre-treatment filtering and submitting with the storage stage.
Firstly
, the saltwater goes from the sea through a pretreatment filter before the main filtration.
Next,
under high pressure, the
water
is forced through a membrane, where impurities and salt molecules are eliminated.
After
this
stage filtered
water
particles pass
further
stages,
whereas
filter backwash and seawater concentrate return back to the sea. In the third stage, the filtered
water
is post-treated with lime, chlorine and fluoride for its disinfection,
as a result
getting the potable
water
.
Finally
, desalinated
water
is stored in a reservoir and
after
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served to people by an integrated
water
supply system.
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