The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from on university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five yeas.

The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from on university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five yeas.
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The pie chart illustrates the lifestyle of anththroplody graduates after completing their university
studies
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. The table depicts the wages they get after five years.
Overall
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, the majority of them full-time
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just over half. Part-time
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while
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doing
studies
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are the lowest proportion.
On the other hand
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part-time
workers
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and unemployed place next respectively. The rest show the same percentage of full-time
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and no detail. In the table, the government
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is the most salaried employee among the
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sectors
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. It is obvious, that a large portion is the full-time
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just over half 52%.
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, part-time
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while
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studying the least 5%. Part-time
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and unemployed are shown almost 1 to four together 15%, and 12% respectively.
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, full-time work and
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have the same proportion as the graduates without details after leaving university.
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, I can see in the table among the
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sectors
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government
sector
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has the highest employment and most salaried
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while
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the other two
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all
so
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leads from their institutes. 50% 40% 30% government, Freelance consultant, and private companies respectively. But anthropology employee earns more than 1 to fourth from salaries of the
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sectors
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by more than $75000 except the private
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. 90% per cent take over 50000$ salary. Under $50000 are the least among the
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sectors
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all are under the 1 to 10
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the other hand, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words studies, workers, sector, three, sectors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • anthropology graduates
  • undergraduate degree course
  • chart
  • table
  • findings
  • conclusions
  • salary data
  • comparisons
  • summarize
  • opinion
  • suggestions
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