The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The graph depicts
survey’s
conclusion about the percentage of Correct article usage
the survey’s
people
’s habit
when they buy Fix the agreement mistake
habits
coffee
or tea
in five Australian cities in the last
4 weeks in three categories. In general, the percentage of people
who went to café
for Correct article usage
a café
tea
or coffee
was the highest while
people
who bought fresh coffee
in last
4 weeks Correct article usage
the last
was
the lowest.
From the bar graph, it can be clearly seen that there was almost 65% Correct subject-verb agreement
were
people
in Melbourne went to Change preposition
of people
the
café Correct article usage
a
for having
Change preposition
to have
tea
or coffee
. It was followed by Sydney and Hobart which had about 60%. Meanwhile, Adelaide only had just under 50%, it was the lowest in this
category.
Moving to the other two categories, comparing
with other cities, Hobart Wrong verb form
compared
was
the highest percentage in terms of Verb problem
had
people
who purchased instant coffee
or tea
with approximately 55%. In contrast
, for category
of Add an article
the category
a category
people
who bought fresh coffee
or tea
, Sydney had almost 45%. Meanwhile
Brisbane could not touch 35%, it put them as the lowest number.Add a comma
Meanwhile,
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, tea, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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