You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask you landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain. - why you can't pay the rent - when you will pay the rent - How you will ensure you can pay the rent in the future

Dear Mr. Johnson, I am your tenant and have been living in your flat in the city centre for a couple of years.
, these days I am having financial problems. That’s why I am writing to you in order to request an extended period of renting. The main reason of delaying is that I crashed my car a few days ago and I had to pay about $ 350 to have it repaired.
, I was seriously injured during the accident and needed to go to hospital.
, I cannot pay the rent on time. I request you will give me some more days for the payment. I am currently working overtime to be able to cover all my expenses and pay my rent as soon as possible. I assure you that I will defray the rent thoroughly and quickly.
, you can get my latest brand phone as a guarantee if you want. I look forward to hearing from you with a positive response to my letter. Yours sincerely, Charles Atkins
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The letter effectively explains the reasons for the late rent payment and sets a clear timeline for payment. However, it could benefit from a more formal tone and polite language, especially when offering the phone as a guarantee.
The logical structure of the letter is well developed, with clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Each paragraph focuses on a single idea and contributes to the overall coherence of the letter.
The letter demonstrates a good use of vocabulary and expression, effectively conveying the reasons for late rent payment and the commitment to pay in the future. However, it could benefit from more formal and polite language in certain parts of the letter.
The grammatical range is generally good, with a few minor errors in sentence structure and word choice. Proofreading for grammatical accuracy and syntax would improve the overall quality of the letter.
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