You have just returned home from a holiday and have received photographs from a friend who was on holiday with you. Write to your frind thanking them for the photographs. You should include: -a description of the photos -the most memorable thing about the holiday -invite them to come and stay with you

Dear Kuldip, I hope you are in sound health and doing well. I am writing
letter to thank you for the photographs you took
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for five days. I am really blessed to have a foreign friend like you in
. During
, you have given me tremendous support in terms of accommodation, transportation, etc. You made my
memorable by capturing some stunning pictures of me across
. I especially want to thank you for the picture taken in Dal Lake, which is really a picturesque area. I have enjoyed every moment in
, as all the places,
as Gulmarg, Sonmarg,
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, etc were very beautiful and mesmerizing.
In addition
to that, people from
are really friendly and cooperative, which made my
undoubtedly easy. I would like to invite you to my country and home to spend some quality time with my friends and family members. Bangladesh is a very beautiful country, as it has the largest sea beach in Coxsbazar. See you soon. Thanking you, Faisal
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The greeting and closing need to be more formal and appropriately structured for a letter. Consider using traditional formal letter greetings and closings.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a single main idea and that the ideas are logically connected throughout the letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.


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