some countries encourage foreign companies to open in their country. many people think that government should focus on encouraging local businesses rather than foreign businesses. To what extent do you agree?

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things
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books
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no exception.
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but
also
negative ,and
this
essay will discuss good
things
and bad
things
about using e-
books
.One of the main advantages of
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for
people
who
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of
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reading
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once buy electronic
device
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devices
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or
application
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applications
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with
books
in order to long time use it.Despite
this
,
lack
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the lack
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of aesthetic beauty at home is
disadvantage
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a disadvantage
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. The good thing is that e-
books
are available for all
people
who use phones. At the moment
books
have become very expensive and not all
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people
have the opportunity to buy
books
for
such
a high price, so many prefer just once buy an application or e-book and enjoy reading.
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, now humans can find the majority of
books
online.
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phones
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which give access to many
books
by subscription. The bad
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is that e-
books
only
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inside one's phone,
people
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and people
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can not see beautiful
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corners and spines
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their
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.
Moreover
, a lot of humans not only
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paper
books
but
also
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their
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by using
books
because often authors create special covers for
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with amazing illustrations. A series of
books
about Harry Potter can be a good example: there is a special edition ,which gives you an opportunity to see the house of
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Hogwarts
on your bookshelf. In conclusion ,
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of
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good step forward because
people
are always looking for ways to save money and the internet is a good way for
this
. Despite
this
, the absence of a book in reality is
drawback
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a drawback
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.
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