The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph and the pie chart illustrate the illegal
activities
in the United Kingdom for the past year.
Overall
, it can be seen that the biggest number of crimes
were committed by people between the ages of 16 and 24. In addition
, the major type of illegal activities
for last
year were violent crimes
and the lowest proportion was for problems with the public order.
First of all, it is clear that
12 was the age when children started to be engaged in crimes
with around 5 tens of thousand violations. After that, at 16, with a dramatic rise in numbers, they reached 70 tens of thousands. The peak of illegal activities
for the past year was 80 ten thousand and was made by 20-year-old men and women, followed by 60 people at 24 and a sharp decline afterwards.
About one-half of the crimes
were violent (46%), followed by property and drug illegal activities
with 23% and 22%, respectively. Only 9% of the violations were linked to public order disturbing.Submitted by delulcheva on
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