You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. "You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year." Write a letter to the couple. In your letter, • explain why you think you would be suitable for the job • say what else you could do for the family • give your reasons for wanting the job Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Sir or Madam,
Hope you are in good health and in high spirits. My name is Amandeep Singh. I have seen your advertisement in "
Time
of India" dated 1st November 2023 that you are looking for a suitable teacher who will teach English to your two children for a year. I am writing this
letter to express my interest in this
position.
I have good experience in teaching skills and also
got opportunities to impart coaching to many students in the English language as I have an excellent command of this
language. I believe that I can hand your children which will be beneficial for them in their academics.
I can also
provide training for extracurricular skills in their leisure time
which will help them build a fair understanding of different aspects apart from daily study routine. I am also
good at badminton and other sports which helps them to get engaged in sports too.
I want to visit Australia next month as I have enrolled in a Business Communication course and got admission to a reputed college. I have spare time
in the evening from 2 pm till 6 pm to spend time
with your wards. If I get the opportunity to provide training that will be fruitful for them in their fields.
Hope you find my details useful as per your requirements. Looking forward positive response from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
AmandeepSubmitted by deep.amans86 on
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task response
Ensure to address all the points mentioned in the prompt about why you are suitable for the job, what else you could do for the family, and your reasons for wanting the job.
coherence and cohesion
Work on using appropriate connecting words and phrases to enhance the coherence and flow of the letter. Also, pay attention to the greeting and closing to ensure they are appropriate for a formal letter.
lexical resource
Expand your range of vocabulary to express ideas more precisely and clearly, and avoid repetition of words. Additionally, use more varied and sophisticated vocabulary to improve the overall lexical resource.
grammatical range
Pay attention to sentence structure and grammar to ensure accurate and varied use of complex sentences, as well as to avoid grammatical errors throughout the letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite