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The line graphs below show the subscriptions to mobile and fixed phone lines in four different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graphs below show the subscriptions to mobile and fixed phone lines in four different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs give information about the
number
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 of subscribers to domestic or cellphone lines in a
number
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 of countries for the decade between 2005 and 2015.
Overall
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, it can be seen that in general, more
people
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 were using mobile
phones
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 through
this
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 period in these four states.
In addition
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, during the years the
number
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 of subscribers in both of these categories remained almost the same, except in Uruguay and India, where the count of new contracts for mobile
phones
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 increased. In 2005, 60 hundred
people
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 in the UK, the country with the highest count in
this
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 category, were using fixed telephone lines.
This
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number
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 fluctuated and remained almost the same in the years, with a slight drop to 50 hundred
people
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 in 2015. Only around 3 hundred of the populations of each of the states Eritrea and India used domestic
phones
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 during
this
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 decade. Mobile phone subscribers in Uruguay increased from 40 hundred
people
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 in 2005 to 150 in 2015, taking the lead position among the others.
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, in the
last
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 year, there were 70 hundred
people
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 in India who used cell
phones
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, in comparison with almost none of the population in
this
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 country in the beginning.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, phones with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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