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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
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The pie chart illustrates after-graduation life for Anthropology former undergraduate students of a university into six different categories, Full-time
work
, Full-time
postgrad
 study Part-time, Part-time
work
along with
 studying
postgrad
, Unemployed and Unknown,
while
 the the table depicts their annual income, as an employee in three sectors, after five years of experience.
Overall
, it is clear from the pie chart that Full-time
work
 was a dominant choice for them, where their best annual payment lies in the Government sector for a majority of its employees
according to
 the table. As the pie chart shows, the largest segment with 52% is Full-time
work
,
whereas
 the smallest piece is Part-time
work
 and simultaneously studying
postgrad
 with a 5% contribution,
also
 both Unknown and Full-time
postgrad
 study stood just above studying
postgrad
 with only 8%.
In addition
, the next largest parts are Part-time
work
 and Unemployed with 15% and 12% share.
On the other hand
, a large number of employees are paid 100,000$ or more with 40% , 50% and 30% for Freelance consultation , Government sector and Private sector respectively.
Moreover
, the lowest payments are paid to a few numbers of employees, trough all three sectors with 5% , 5% and 10% with an order mentioned above.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words work, postgrad with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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