People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest?
It is an obvious fact that most
people
prefer staying in their “comfort zone” more than taking risks to make changes in their lives. In my essay, I will discuss the reason for feeling fear leaving a “comfort zone”, and possible solutions to this
issue.
To begin
with the fact, people
, who are afraid of facing new challenges in their lives, always lose the opportunity for a better future. For instance
, some individuals do not get used to new environments and they do not travel a lot. As a result
, that person has very poor knowledge of life and the real world. Another example is, that if some employees are promoted to a new position, they will probably skip this
chance and pass it to their co-workers, because of their weak nature. Furthermore
, those kinds of people
could not manage to stand out of the crowd.
However
, there are a few possible solutions that can help to overcome this
struggle. Firstly
, people
should try making them step out of their “comfort zone” so, their laziness is overcome. This
will train the character to stand the difficulties. Secondly
, human behaviour should be changed step by step by adding some missions and making a daily list of goals. For example
, if someone becomes anxious to give a speech, he can practice it alone in front of the mirror, and then
share his act among his friends and finally
to strangers. By doing this
, that person will gain the great skill of giving a speech to an audience.
To conclude
, although
society prefers to go along with
their habitual lifestyle, this
life status will not guarantee stability and happiness in life. Being free to do something new can broaden people
’s understanding of comfort and make their nature flexible to obstacles.Submitted by zakhra.aliyeva2001 on
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