The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
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The bar chart compares information on home and foreign male and female
students
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enrolled at three universities for a period of 3 years(2010 to 2012).
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, it is evident that throughout the period of 3 years, more
British
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local
students
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of
both
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sexes registered in tertiary schools. Moreso,The two categories of female
students
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witnessed a rise over the years. The number of overseas
students
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for
both
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genders increased steadily. Figures for male
students
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who were
British
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citizens fluctuated
whereas
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, male exchange
students
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increased dramatically.
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,The men from Britain in 2010 were around 38 which is 18 individuals more when compared to those who are foreigners but declined sharply in 2011 to around 25 before rising to a high point of approximately 43 in 2012 which is slightly higher than the other by around 5. The highest figure for
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home males was around 43 in 2012,
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, the lowest figures were seen in 2011 at 24. But for the international
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, there were 38 persons in 2012 and 20 in 2010. the enrolment figure for
both
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categories is relatively stable at approximately 23 people in 2011. With respect to the women,
both
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sets noticed an increase even though the difference between them is a large margin.
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the number of
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who are
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was approximately 32 and increased dramatically to 45 in 2012, those who were foreigners started at 14 in 2010 and increased slightly to below 20.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, british, both with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • enrolment trends
  • steady increase
  • fluctuating enrolments
  • international student numbers
  • comparative analysis
  • favored choice
  • global economic conditions
  • admission policies
  • program offerings
  • student satisfaction
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