Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map shows the design of Brandfield
city
that the latest shopping mall will be built between two options whether in point S1 or S2 area. Overall
, it can be seen that either the S1 or S2 sector
are near railway and Change the noun form
sectors
road
.
From the east side
, there is a golf course and park and it is the most spacious facility among the others. On the other hand
, at
the north Change preposition
on
side
of the map and east from
the Change preposition
of
river
there is a housing Add a comma
river,
estate
which split by the road
. At
the east Change preposition
On
side
of the residence
there is the S1 site Add a comma
residence,
that
could be a new shopping mall beside the S2 site. Meanwhile, at the centre of the Correct pronoun usage
which
city
, there is city
centre Correct article usage
a city
that is
very close to the railway at the north, surrounded by the road
, and divided by the river.
Moreover
, on the west side
, there is an Industrial estate
which is the smallest if compared with another buildings
in the Replace the adjective
another building
other buildings
city
. Nonetheless
, the industrial estate
has same
characteristics Correct article usage
the same
with
the golf course which both of the structures are not crossed either by the river or the Change preposition
as
road
. Furthermore
, at the south of the industrial estate
, there is a space across the railway and bordered by the road
at the north and the west, that is
the S2 site, another candidate for a shopping mall will be placed.Submitted by sidneynatasha16 on
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