The table shows data about underground railway system in six major cities with data opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in million
The given table illustrates
underground
railway system in six different cities: London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles. Correct article usage
the underground
Overall
, it is noticable
that the most used Correct your spelling
noticeable
notable
metro
system is in Japan, and the last
one is in Kyoto.
It can be seen that oldest
Correct article usage
the oldest
line
is in London, since it opened in 1863. Furthermore
, this
one has the longest route, because of the 394 kilometres
, even though it is only the third one in the most passenger numerbs
. In 1900 the Parisian Correct your spelling
numbers
line
built
and has the second longest Add a missing verb
was built
kilometres
, which is 199. Paris metro
line
reaches the second most people numbers. After 27 years, the Tokyio
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Tokyo
metro
was available in 1927 which has the most passengers per year, however
its Add a comma
however,
lenght
is only 155km. In Washington DC the Correct your spelling
length
line
opened in 1976, with 126 kilometres
route. This
railway's frequency decrased
Correct your spelling
decreased
under
150 passengers per year. The 1981's Kyoto Change preposition
to under
line
is the smallest in kilometres
and also
in the quantity of mankinds
. In 2001 Los Angeles Correct your spelling
mankind
line
opened with its
28 Correct pronoun usage
apply
kilometres
and 50 million passengers per year.
In summary, the most popular railway is in Tokyio
, Correct your spelling
Tokyo
likewise
in Paris. In addition
, notably the youngest metro
is in Los Angeles .Submitted by palvdori on
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