The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying drinking habits in five Australian cities

The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying drinking habits in five Australian cities
The bar chart above compares five different Australian cities in terms of the tendency of their citizens to purchase tea or
coffee
.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the number of people who bought fresh
coffee
in the
last
4 weeks is the smallest,
in contrast
, humans who went to a cafe for
coffee
or tea in the
last
month is the most, except in one city.
While
the percentage of consumers that drank fresh
coffee
is the highest in Sydney and Melbourne with around 43% and roughly 45% , respectively ,
Brisbane
and Adelaide are the lowest with just under 35% each .
Furthermore
, Hobart accounts for about 37% in
this
category. Regarding the rate of people that visited the cafe to buy tea or
coffee
, Sydney, Melbourne and Hobert are the leaders with just above 60% each.
However
,
Brisbane
and Adelaide are the outsiders with 55% and almost half considerably. In the case of lovers of instant
coffee
, Hobart and
Brisbane
have higher rates than others, with approximately 53% for
Brisbane
and just under 55% for Hobart.
While
Adelaide has slightly more percentages than Melbourne in
this
category, with exactly 50% and around 45% respectively, Sydney is at the lowest point with almost 45%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, brisbane with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • preference
  • beverage
  • caffeine
  • demographics
  • trend
  • survey
  • cultural significance
  • habit
  • seasonal variation
  • health consciousness
  • availability
  • implications
  • urban vs. rural consumption
  • data interpretation
  • quantitative analysis
  • fluctuations
  • patterns
  • peak times
  • economical impact
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