The charts below show the percentage of students joining North West University.

The charts below show the percentage of students joining North West University.
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The pie charts below illustrate the different percentages of students that joined
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University.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the largest number of students joined the art faculty, nearly a quarter of the total student population with the figure being 23%.
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is closely followed by the computing and science programmes which stand at 22 and 21% respectively.
On the other hand
, the faculties of Medicine, Law and Engineering experienced the lowest numbers, at 5, 6 and 9. A small chunk of undergraduates underwent a Business degree
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to around 14% of the university’s community. Taking a closer look at the arts, it is clear to see that a large proportion of the pupils are of a South American heritage, more than 3/4 to be exact. The next largest category is the Europeans which is shown as 21%. In the minority are other ethnicities
such
as, Asian, African and Australian, these percentages being 6, 4 and 2 of the total population.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • enrollment
  • demographics
  • percentages
  • academic year
  • trends
  • gender distribution
  • faculties
  • departments
  • domestic
  • international
  • academic disciplines
  • economic conditions
  • scholarship
  • reputation
  • growth
  • parity
  • data analysis
  • popularity
  • external factors
  • predictive modeling
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