The charts below give information on average life expectancy in four countries, from 1993 to 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares the
life
expectancy
of people
in four countries in 2008 and the table provides information about the life
expectancy
change between 1958 and 2008 in these four countries.
Overall
, the life
expectancy
was the highest in Japan and lowest in Indonesia
. The increase in life
expectancy
was greater in Indonesia
than the other countries.
In 2008, the people
of Japan had a much higher life
expectancy
which was close to 82 years
, whereas
the people
of Indonesia
had the lowest life
expectancy
rate of about 70 years
. The life
expectancy
of people
in Korea was higher by nearly 2 years
than that of the people
in the USA with approximately 77 years
of life
expectancy
.
Between 1953 and 2008, the life
expectancy
of people
in Indonesia
showed a remarkable increase of 15.7 years
, while
a growth of 12.5 years
can be observed in Korea. While
the USA saw the lowest rise in life
expectancy
with 3 years
, it was a little greater in Japan than in the USA by 0.5 years
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