The Maps below Show The Centre of A Small Town Called Islip as It is Now, and Plans for Its Development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The Maps below Show The Centre of A Small Town Called Islip as It is Now, and Plans for Its Development.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate the current state as is the downtown of a city called Islip and the project to be building in the future.
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, the main change is
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construction of a round and dual road around the centre, including some facilities. On the current map of Islip, it is possible to see a main street crossing the city from West to East, with many shops on
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the North
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and South sides. Beneath the retails
area
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bellow the main road, there is an
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for houses. In the Southwest, near the housing, there is a school and in the Southeast side, there is a huge park. For the planned development, it will be built a ring avenue around the town centre and where today there is the main road will be converted
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a way for pedestrians only. Along
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pathway, in the North,
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there
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will be placed a bus station, a shopping centre, a car
parking
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park
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and
new
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a new
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area
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for houses.
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the South side, the
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for shops will remain,
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the home
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will be increased next to the school and near
to
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apply
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the park, which
one
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apply
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will be reduced
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the new housing and the circular boulevard.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • town center
  • commercial buildings
  • residential buildings
  • main road
  • pedestrian-only zone
  • ring road
  • divert traffic
  • housing areas
  • expansion
  • development plans
  • green spaces
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