Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it it more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some learners of tertiary level are interested in other

courses

with their core

courses

,

while

others prefer to concentrate only on the primary

courses

. As knowledge of other

subjects

are

Change the verb form

is

show examples

important to

be succeed

Change the verb form

succeed

show examples

, I think

students

should

study

these

along with

their professional studies.

Firstly

, some

students

like to

study

not only their own

subjects

but

also

other ones. They can understand the significance of learning about

relevent

Correct your spelling

relevant

things that were not covered by their own syllabus.

For example

, a civil engineering student should learn about the basic

priciples

Correct your spelling

principles

of physics to properly grasp his topics related to the mechanics of structure and building. If he doesn't get the opportunity to learn general physics, he may get

trouble

Change preposition

into trouble

show examples

to solve

Change the verb form

solving

show examples

problems of civil engineering in future.

This

example can be applied to other

subjects

as well.

Therefore

, every student should have

qualification

Fix the agreement mistake

qualifications

show examples

in other

subjects

in addition

to his main ones.

On the other hand

, there are

also

some people in universities, who think giving attention to other

subjects

is a waste of time.

According to

them, every undergraduate should be proficient in one field only.

For instance

, if someone

get

Change the verb form

gets

show examples

admitted into

a

Change the article

an

show examples

electrical engineering program, he or she must

study

only the

courses

of

this

program.

However

, focusing only on

single

Add an article

a single

show examples

subject can be detrimental for any future professional. Though they can manage a job in their field, the lack of knowledge will

meke

Correct your spelling

make

them suffer to work properly in

long

Correct article usage

the long

show examples

run. In conclusion, a number of

students

believe that they should

study

other

subjects

with their main

subjects

while

others oppose it. I support the learning of other

courses

along with

the primary ones

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

because

these extra knowledge

Change the determiner

this extra knowledge

show examples

will help the

students

in their later life.