The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual
The graph compares the number of accommodations in the US by their yearly income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
, the number of households that had income less than 50,000
dollars
and 75,000
dollars
or more, fluctuated over the years.
However
, the same annual earnings range from 50,000
dollars
to 74,999
dollars
remained constant from 2007 to 2015.
Firstly
, the number of households with income less than 25,000
dollars
and between 25,000 and 49,999 was 25
million
and nearly 27
million
in 2007, respectively. These figures rose to almost 29
million
and almost 30
million
, respectively in 2011, but dropped to approximately 28 and 29
million
in the following period.
On the other hand
, the households who had earned not less than 50,000
dollars
and not more than 74,999
dollars
didn't change in these periods.
However
, the same with earning 75,000 to 99,000
dollars
as well as
100,000
dollars
or more, witnessed slight fluctuations. The first group fell from nearly 14 to nearly 13 in 2011 and climbed to exactly 15 in 2011.
Similarly
, the latter group followed the same trend, which was nearly 30 in the first period, dropped to nearly 27 and
then
culminated at approximately 33 in the
last
year.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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