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The charts below show the total number of applicants the year before and the year after Doolittle University’s social media advertising campaign, organized by age range and how close the applicants live to the university.

The charts below show the total number of applicants the year before and the year after Doolittle University’s social media advertising campaign, organized by age range and how close the applicants live to the university.
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bar chart provides data on how many
students
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 decided to study at a UK university from four miscellaneous nations over an interval of 5 years.
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, the
number
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 of applicants from the Middle East, the Far East, and Africa experienced an increase throughout the given period,
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 that of Europe went down remarkably.
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, the maximum
number
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 of
students
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 who went to a UK university for education were from European Nations and Africa in 1999 and 2003, respectively.
According to
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 the bar chart, in 1999, about 30000 applicants were from European nations, which was the highest
number
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 among other countries.
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, a noticeable decline could be witnessed in
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number
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 and reached a little higher than 10000 in 2003. In terms of African
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, they formed the lowest
number
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 of immigrants in 1999 and maintained a relatively constant until 2001 with about 2500
students
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. After which the figure rose slightly to a little higher than 5000 in 2003. Regarding the immigrants from the Middle East, the statistics related to
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 group experienced an upward trend until 2001 and stood at 15000.
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,
this
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 upward trend broke and reduced by 25
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 in 2002,
then
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 increased significantly and stood at 20000 in 2003.
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, with regard to Far East
students
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, a doubling could be seen in the whole given period and reached approximately 30000 in 2003 from 15000 in 1999, which is the highest proportion of
students
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 in all years.
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