The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.
The line graph gives information about how each month's average expenditure on
three
different kinds of metals changed over the year 2014.
It is clear that
the total monthly spending on these three
materials overall
fell with the most dramatic decrease in the price of nickel while
the two other ones had even
a steady rise.
Over the first month, the prices of Nickle and Rephrase
apply
Copper
dropped by 2 and 1 percent
respectively while
this
amount for Zinc experienced an increase of 2 percent
. Over the following three
months, all three
metals cost less until finally
the price for copper
levelled off in May although
two others continued to
fall.
On the first of Jun, having dropped to its lower price, the figure for Nickle then
rose by 2 per cent and remained until the first of September where
followed by a drop of 1 per cent. The same trend can be seen for Zinc and Rephrase
apply
Copper
staying stable from January to September. Over the last
two months, all figures saw an increase of 3 percent
for Zinc and nickel, Change the spelling
per cent
as well as
1 percent
for Change the spelling
per cent
Copper
.Submitted by z.rajabi on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words three, copper, percent with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
▼
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!