The charts below show the result of surveys asking undergraduates and postgraduates why they chose Vaster university. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pie chart below gives information about the percentage of six different reasons why undergraduates and postgraduates chose to study at Vaster University by doing surveys.
According to
the graph, we can see that most students wanted to join the school because of its reputation and
followed closely by the tuition and their personal recommendation Correct word choice
apply
while
only a minority of students shared that their choices were made due to
location, accommodation availability and other reasons.
It is clear that
30% of the total school attendants chose Vaster because of its reputation which was the highest rate. Next,
the second highest percentage was in the cost of studying with 24% then
the third ranking
was 20% of students who decided to join the school Add a hyphen
third-ranking
due to
their personal suggestion. In addition
, location accounted for 10% and dormitory availability took up 9%. Lastly
, there was 7% of other reasons which was the lowest proportion.Submitted by yennhicao24 on
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