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The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with date opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions.

The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with date opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions.
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The table
illustrate
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the date
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date
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data
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about
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 underground
tailway
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railway
 systems in six urban
area
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areas
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 which include
date
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the date
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 opened,
kilometres
 of
route
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the route
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 and
visitors
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visitors'
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nembers
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numbers
members
 per
year
 in millions.
Overall
, London
where
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 has the oldest train system since 1863 has 775 million
passenger
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passengers
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. In
1900s
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the 1900s
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 century when Paris, Tokyo and
washington
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Washington
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 DC and Hyoto
implementd
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implemented
implement
 their railway systems which
is
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were
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respectivly opned
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respectively opened
 in 1900, 1927, 1976 and 1981.
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, Tokyo
has
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had
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 the most visitors
1927
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in 1927
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which
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with
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 only 155
kilometres
 of routes
while
 Paris
has
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 199
Kilometres
 of routes but 1191 passengers per
year
. Washington DC,
however
, has 144 population yearly with 126
of
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railway routes which is higher than Kyoto and Los Angeles.
Furthermore
, Kyoto with only 11
kilometres
 of
route
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the route
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 has just under 50
papulation
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population
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 in a
year
.
hence
, Los Angeles which has the newest train system with 28
kilometres
 has one 50
passerngers
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passengers
 per
year
.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words kilometres, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • underground railway system
  • chronologically
  • significance
  • correlation
  • discrepancies
  • outliers
  • extensive network
  • limited network
  • urban sprawl
  • efficiency
  • hypothesize
  • passenger numbers
  • kilometres of route
  • date opened
  • major cities
  • data analysis
  • comparative analysis
  • historical context
  • speculate
  • potential causes
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