You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how cheese is made. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram illustrates the

cheese

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production.

Overall

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, the linear process consists of several stages and includes some forks. At the beginning of the

production

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production,

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there is a first fork dividing the processing of

cheese

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on traditional and most making. In both cases,

a

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raw milk is taken and ended at coagulation, but for most making

cheese

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there are two additional stages

as

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“pasteurisation” and “standardisation and filtration”. During curdling some enzymes and fermenting microorganisms witnessing inoculation are added. Afterwards,

cheese

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is cut by a mechanism and after undergoes stirring and cooking

both

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in both

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directions anticlockwise and clockwise.

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there

is

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are

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some curds, a part of

whey

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the whey

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is draining to make

a

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apply

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fresh

cheese

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divided

on

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into

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cottage and cream

cheese

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. The

last

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one is milling and salting to be poured into

molds

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moulds

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. By applying the press on it the draining of additional whey occurs.

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While

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When

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the

last

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phase

passed

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passes

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, which is called ripening,

cheese

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is ready to be consumed.