You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how cheese is made. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows how cheese is made.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates the
cheese
production.
Overall
, the linear process consists of several stages and includes some forks. At the beginning of the
production
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production,
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there is a first fork dividing the processing of
cheese
on traditional and most making. In both cases,
a
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raw milk is taken and ended at coagulation, but for most making
cheese
there are two additional stages
as
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“pasteurisation” and “standardisation and filtration”. During curdling some enzymes and fermenting microorganisms witnessing inoculation are added. Afterwards,
cheese
is cut by a mechanism and after undergoes stirring and cooking
both
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directions anticlockwise and clockwise.
Next,
there
is
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some curds, a part of
whey
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the whey
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is draining to make
a
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fresh
cheese
divided
on
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into
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cottage and cream
cheese
. The
last
one is milling and salting to be poured into
molds
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. By applying the press on it the draining of additional whey occurs.
While
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the
last
phase
passed
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passes
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, which is called ripening,
cheese
is ready to be consumed.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words cheese with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • cheese production
  • raw milk
  • pasteurization
  • harmful bacteria
  • rennet
  • starter cultures
  • coagulation
  • curds
  • whey
  • heating
  • pressing
  • molding
  • aging
  • salt
  • packaging
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