The graph below shows the population of particular country by age group starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040.
The line chart illustrates
the
Japan’s Correct article usage
apply
citizen
by Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
years
category beginning in 1960 and counting a prediction Change the noun form
year
2040
. Change preposition
for 2040
Overall
, is clear that the middle population rose sharply and those aged 0-14 and elderly
decreased slowly. Correct article usage
the elderly
Also
, the same trends are projected for 2040.
Looking for more details, the number of the youngest and the middle age
decreased steady
in Change the adjective
steadily
Japan Individuals
. Correct your spelling
Japanese individuals
Moreover
, the age
0-14 has been
Unnecessary verb
apply
a
slumped dramatically from 30% to around 12%, Correct article usage
apply
whereas
, the middle age
rose significantly at
above 50% to 60% Change preposition
apply
in
1960 until 1990 and there will be a steady drop in the number Change preposition
from
approximately
50% in 1990 to 2040.
In early 1960, the elderly increased significantly Change preposition
by approximately
at
above 15% to 50% until 2040. Change preposition
from
Furthermore
, those will be a dramatic rise in the number of age
65+. Wrong verb form
aged
However
, in
1960 to 1970, Change preposition
from
the
it Remove the article
apply
was
maintained Unnecessary verb
apply
the
same level Change preposition
at the
at
15% for the elderly in Japan.Change preposition
of
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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