The graph below shows consumers’ average annual expenditure on cell phones, national and international fixed-line, and services in America between 2001 and 2010.
The
line
chart gives information about the amount of money spending
on cell Phones national and International fixed - Replace the word
spent
line
and services from 2001 to 2010 in America.
overall
, the cell Phone
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phone
scrvice
was the most Correct your spelling
service
consumption
in 2010, Replace the word
consumed
while
the Internial
fixed- Correct your spelling
Internal
line
shown
steady or constant spending during the period.
In2001,Add the auxiliary verb
showed
has shown
national
fixed Add an article
the national
line
stood at 700$, after that fallin around 200 $ in 2006. In Contrast
, cell Phone service at the begining
Was 200 $ for expenditure and rose to Correct your spelling
beginning
reached
500$ in 2006, it continued to rise until the end of the Wrong verb form
reach
peried
in 2010 Correct your spelling
period
about
750 $.
The figures Change preposition
at about
of
international fixed-Change preposition
for
line
service remained stable Fram
2004 to 2010 Correct your spelling
from
aroud
300$.Correct your spelling
around
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