In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?
In many regions, we can't deny that as
people
's life expectancy is increasing more than before. Some citizens think that this
overincrease
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over increase
population
can directly affect the government
of a country
. there are positive aspects of an aging
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ageing
population
however
I totally agree with people
's opinion as its demerits outweigh its merits. In the paragraph below I will try to highlight both the positive and negative effects of this
type of growing population
on society.
Firstly
, I can't deny the benefits of a large population
of old citizens as this
may help government
to maintain a stable society. Predominantly because those Add an article
the government
people
have already lived half of their life and have learned to earn their daily life income addition to which they are less likely to perform any risky work. Secondly
, It is possible to have a good environment if the country
has numerous old individuals for example
, as old people
are less likely to go out travelling this
causes less exhaustion of fuel.
However
, reaching the above conclusion doesn't mean that people
ageing for government
can be ignored. For one thing, the point at issue is the shortage of labour which means the company's economy is at high risk. Furthermore
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,
people
become old the desire for consumption decreases. For example
, small towns and villages of country
China hold approximately 50% of the aged population
These people
usually buy things of necessity which impacts the consumption of that part and at last
face difficulty at times in balancing out the economy of that particular region.
To summarize, I think the old population
creates a positive environment and is essential as they have an experiential view towards various ongoing topics of our society. Although
it's important to consider the fact that over the increase of it can affect both government
and economy of a country
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