The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The graph below illustrates visitors overseas from three areas of the continent in
thousand
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thousands
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over 20 years.
Overall
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, the coast and lakes had the same and the most visits, but the lakes had the lowest number of guests in the beginning. The coast
firstly
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in 1987 had 40000 customers and after falling one time in 1992 rockets increase and count approximately 75000 visitors. The mountains rose steadily between 1987 and 2007 and
was
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not fall. They change only for 15000 clients from 20000 to near 35000. During 1997 and 2002, 5 years in a row they had the same account of inviters. The lakes had
fluctuated
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levels of visitors from the period that started
from
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in
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1997. They glow up to 40000 in 1997.
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Furthermore
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they did not stop growing and in 2002 calculated about 75000 guests. The next 5 years for them were without boost and glow down to clear 50000 clients in 2007.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Significant
  • Trends
  • Comparative analysis
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Plummet
  • Consistency
  • Highlight
  • Reinforce
  • Data representation
  • Time frame
  • Subject matter
  • Overseas visitors
  • Tourism promotion
  • Transportation
  • Accommodation facilities
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