The diagram below shows the production of olive oil.
The given diagram describes the manufacturing of olive oil.
Overall
, the Linking Words
process
comprises a number of stages, starting with harvesting olive from its tree, through different mixed steps, and ending with the final product being stored in the warehouses Use synonyms
as well as
sold in the markets.
At the beginning of the Linking Words
process
, farmers pick olive seed before rinsing it with a specialized machine with cold water. Use synonyms
Then
, the olive is put in the tank and experiences the smashing stage to abstract into two types of substances. Olive paste is contained in the bottle to continue the Linking Words
process
, Use synonyms
while
olive stones are put in a bowl and can be eaten immediately.
The Linking Words
process
goes on with olive paste being bagged with holes, after which point it is pressed and separated by means of apparatus. Use synonyms
Finally
, olives exist as water and oil which are kept in warehouses and sold in groceries and supermarkets to cater for cooking needs.Linking Words
Submitted by phuongdong.nguyentran on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
▼
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words process with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
▼